WALHT write an explanation
Success Criteria
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Self Assessment
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I will have an introduction
(Title, hook, 1 sentence saying what the writing will be about)
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I will have an body of text
(look at my first picture, use my keywords to write 1-2 sentences explaining it)
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I will have an conclusion
(I will end with a personal statement or interesting fact)
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How a circuit
Have you ever wondered How a circuit
Works. This writing will explain
How a circuit works.
We used a electricity in all
Technology we use. We ues
It for our power and wifi.
Power is tiny electrons that are moving.
A simple circuit uses a battery and a light.
The electrons go through the circuit.
The current comes out off the battery end
Into the positive end.
I think electricity is helpful.
Kia ora, Shiloh. I am Maatia from Te Hapara School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked your how a circuit works writing.
I learnt that it runs by electricity.
Maybe you could try making more understandable.
You have done a fantastic job on your writing though.
If you would like to see my learning visit my blog <a href="https://http://thsmaatiam.blogspot.com/>here</a>
Mā te wā
Maatia
Kia ora my name is koston. I go to Te Hapara school.
DeleteI really liked how you tell me you wonder how a circuit works sometimes I do to.
I learnt that power is tiny electrons are moving.
Maybe you could look on my blog and look at my information about me